Copy-edit the example

voltagex · voltagex · commit dd5f8fcb4e17 · 2013-03-16T00:32:36.000+11:00
diff --git a/example/index.html b/example/index.html
@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 <html lang="en">
   <head>
     <meta charset="utf-8">
-    <title>Intro.js | A better way for new feature introduction and step-by-step users guide</title>
+    <title>Intro.js | Better introductions for websites and features with a step-by-step guide for your projects.</title>
     <meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1.0">
-    <meta name="description" content="Intro.js - A better way for new feature introduction and step-by-step users guide for your website and project.">
+    <meta name="description" content="Intro.js -Better introductions for websites and features with a step-by-step guide for your projects.">
     <meta name="author" content="Afshin Mehrabani (@afshinmeh) in usabli.ca group">
 
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@@ -69,8 +69,8 @@ <h3 class="muted">Intro.js</h3>
       <hr>
 
       <div class="jumbotron">
-        <h1 data-step="1" data-intro="Hello all! :) This is the name of project, IntroJs.">Intro<span style="font-weight: normal;">.js</span></h1>
-        <p class="lead" data-step="4" data-intro="Let's try it. It's free and open-source.">A better way for new feature introduction and step-by-step users guide for your website and project.</p>
+        <h1 data-step="1" data-intro="Hello all! :) This project's called Intro.js.">Intro<span style="font-weight: normal;">.js</span></h1>
+        <p class="lead" data-step="4" data-intro="Let's try it. It's free and open-source.">Better introductions for websites and features with a step-by-step guide for your projects.</p>
         <a class="btn btn-large btn-success" href="javascript:void(0);" onclick="javascript:introJs().start();">Show me how</a>
       </div>
 
@@ -85,16 +85,15 @@ <h4>Fast & Small</h4>
           <p><strong>4 KB</strong> JavaScript and <strong>2 KB</strong> CSS. That's all.</p>
 
           <h4>Free & Open-Source</h4>
-          <p>Free and open-source to commercial use. Published under MIT license.</p>
+          <p>Free and open-source (including commercial use). Published under MIT license.</p>
         </div>
 
         <div class="span6" data-step="3" data-intro="More features, more fun.">
-          <h4>Keyboard + Mouse navigating</h4>
-          <p>Ability to navigating with Mouse and Keyboard arrows, <code>←</code>, <code>→</code> and <code>ESC</code> to exit.</p>
-
-          <h4>Browsers Compatibllity</h4>
-          <p>Currently for Modern Browsers only, but I'll try to make it compatible for old browsers also in next versions.</p>
+          <h4>Keyboard + Mouse navigation</h4>
+          <p>Ability to navigate with the mouse, or the keyboard - <code>←</code>, <code>→</code> and <code>ESC</code> to exit.</p>
 
+          <h4>Browser Compatibllity</h4>
+          <p>Better compatibility is on the roadmap, but currently it should work in recent versions of Firefox and Chrome (probably IE10, too!)</p>
           <h4>Developed with <3</h4>
           <p>With <3 in <a href='http://usabli.ca/' target="_blank" title="usabli.ca group">usabli.ca</a>, Tehran.</p>
         </div>
@@ -109,4 +108,4 @@ <h4>Developed with <3</h4>
     </div>
     <script type="text/javascript" src="../minified/intro.min.js"></script>
   </body>
-</html>
+</html>
