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 # 8 Web services
 
-Web services allows you use formats like XML or JSON to exchange information through HTTP. For example you want to know weather of Shanghai tomorrow, share price of Apple, or commodity information in Amazon, you can write a piece of code to get information from open platforms, just like you call a local function and get its return value.
+Web services allow you use formats like XML or JSON to exchange information through HTTP. For example, if you want to know the weather in Shanghai tomorrow, the current share price of Apple, or product information on Amazon, you can write a piece of code to fetch that information from open platforms. In Go, this process can be comparable to calling a local function and getting its return value.
 
-The key point is that web services are platform independence, it allows you deploy your applications in Linux and interactive with ASP.NET applications in Windows; same thing, there is no problem of interacting with JSP in FreeBSD as well.
+The key point is that web services are platform independent. This allows you to deploy your applications on Linux and interact with ASP.NET applications in Windows, for example, just like you wouldn't have a problem interacting with JSP on FreeBSD either.
 
-REST and SOAP are most popular web services in these days:
+The REST architecture and SOAP protocol are the most popular styles in which web services can be implemented these days:
 
-- Requests of REST is pretty straight forward because it's based on HTTP. Every request of REST is actually a HTTP request, and server handle request by different logic methods. Because many developers know HTTP much already, REST is like in their back pockets. We are going to tell you how to implement REST in Go in section 8.3.
-- SOAP a standard of across network information transmission and remote computer function calls, which is launched by W3C. The problem of SOAP is that its specification is very long and complicated, and it's still getting larger. Go believes that things should be simple, so we're not going to talk about SOAP. Fortunately, Go provides RPC which has good performance and easy to develop, so we will introduce how to implement RPC in Go in section 8.4.
+- REST requests are pretty straight forward because it's based on HTTP. Every REST request is actually an HTTP request, and servers handle requests using different methods. Because many developers are familiar with HTTP already, REST should feel like it's already in their back pockets. We are going to show you how to implement REST in Go in section 8.3.
+- SOAP is a standard for cross-network information transmission and remote computer function calls, launched by W3C. The problem with SOAP is that its specification is very long and complicated, and it's still getting longer. Go believes that things should be simple, so we're not going to talk about SOAP. Fortunately, Go provides support for RPC (Remote Procedure Calls) which has good performance and is easy to develop with, so we will introduce how to implement RPC in Go in section 8.4.
 
-Go is the C language of 21st century, we aspire simple and performance, then we will introduce socket programming in Go in section 8.1 because many game servers are using Socket due to low performance of HTTP. Along with rapid development of HTML5, websockets are used by many page game companies, and we will talk about this more in section 8.2.
+Go is the C language of the 21st century, aspiring to be simple yet performant. With these qualities in mind, we'll introduce you to socket programming in Go in section 8.1. Nowadays, many real-time servers use sockets to overcome the low performance of HTTP. Along with the rapid development of HTML5, websockets are now used by many web based game companies, and we will talk about this more in section 8.2.
 
 ## Links
 
 - [Directory](preface.md)
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+- Next section: [Sockets](08.1.md)