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 ## 登基
 
-年轻的王子，感谢你我一路的相伴，让我把这首诗送给踏上登基旅程的你。
+年轻的王子，让我们把这首诗送给踏上登基旅程的你。
 
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 登基  Enthronement
 
 作者：秋阳创巴，01.22.1973  By Chögyam Trungpa, January 22, 1973
 翻译：扎西桑波，07.24.2015	 
+修订：扎西桑波，04.21.2020
 
 节选自 《自由的迷思》      <<The Myth of Freedom and the Way of Meditation>>
 
 父母是慈悲的，             Parents are very kind,
-但年少的我不懂得感激，       But I am too young to appreciate it.  
-高原的山谷是美丽的，         The highland mountains and valleys are beautiful,
-但没见过平原的我是无知的。     But having never seen the lowlands, I am stupid.
+年少的我却不懂感激。      But I am too young to appreciate it.  
+高原是美丽的，           The highland mountains and valleys are beautiful,
+简单的我却不懂欣赏。        But having never seen the lowlands, I am stupid.
 
-追寻心的滋养，                Having striven for mind's nourishment,
+追寻内心的滋养，                Having striven for mind's nourishment,
 磨砺智慧的锋芒，               Sharpening the spearhead of intellect,
-我遇到了永恒的父母，            I discovered permanent parents
-永难忘。                       Whom I can never forget.
+遇见永恒的父母，               I discovered permanent parents
+终身难忘。                       Whom I can never forget.
 
-没人能影响我的显现，              Having no one to influence my outlook,
-我本初的自然                     I display my primordial nature
-成为了年轻的王子。                 And adopt the style of a youthful prince.  
-这是因为我唯一的父亲。              This is due to the only father guru.
+我本初的自然，              Having no one to influence my outlook,
+无人遮拦。                     I display my primordial nature
+遵父之道，                 And adopt the style of a youthful prince.  
+孕育年轻的王子。               This is due to the only father guru.
 
 我为他人忙碌。                     I am busy working for others.
 智慧穿透障碍，                      Prajna, penetrating all obstacles,
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 赤裸的孩子是美丽而高贵的。                The naked child is beautiful and dignified.
 红色的花朵在天空绽放。                    The red flower blooms in the sky.
-居然看到了无形的舞者，                     It is ironic to see the formless dancer,
-随着没有号手的小号舞蹈。                    Dancing to the trumpet without a trumpeter.
+无形的舞者随着无影的小号，                   It is ironic to see the formless dancer,
+在舞蹈。                               Dancing to the trumpet without a trumpeter.
 
 在红宝石的宫殿，                           At the palace of red ruby,
-听着种子字的轰鸣，                          Listening to the utterance of the seed syllable,
-愉快的看着在虚幻中摇曳的，                    It is joyful to watch the dance of illusion,
-现实的撩人的舞娘。                           The seductive maidens of phenomena.
+听着本初的轰鸣，                          Listening to the utterance of the seed syllable,
+悠然的看着，                                It is joyful to watch the dance of illusion,
+在虚幻中摇曳的现实的撩人的舞娘。                 The seductive maidens of phenomena.
 
 无需宝剑的勇士，                            The warrior without a sword,
- 骑着彩虹，                               Riding on a rainbow,
+骑着彩虹，                                Riding on a rainbow,
 听着无休无止的超然的笑声，                  Hears the limitless laughter of transcendent joy,
 喝着毒液酿造的甜酒。                      The poisonous snake becomes amrita.