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-  Our app should be able to make the browser title bar say whatever we want it to say.
+  Your app should be able to make the browser title bar say whatever you want it to say.
   This cookbook explains how to do it.
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-  **See the <live-example name="cb-set-document-title"></live-example>**.
+  See the <live-example name="cb-set-document-title"></live-example>.
 
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@@ -28,11 +28,11 @@ code-example(format='').
   &lt;title&gt;{{This_Does_Not_Work}}&lt;/title&gt;
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   Sorry but that won't work.
-  The root component of our application is an element contained within the `<body>` tag.
+  The root component of the application is an element contained within the `<body>` tag.
   The HTML `<title>` is in the document `<head>`, outside the body, making it inaccessible to Angular data binding.
 
-  We could grab the browser `document` object and set the title manually.
-  That's dirty and undermines our chances of running the app outside of a browser someday.
+  You could grab the browser `document` object and set the title manually.
+  That's dirty and undermines your chances of running the app outside of a browser someday.
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     Running your app outside a browser means that you can take advantage of server-side
@@ -46,19 +46,19 @@ code-example(format='').
   The [Title](../api/platform-browser/index/Title-class.html) service is a simple class that provides an API
   for getting and setting the current HTML document title:
 
-  * `getTitle() : string` &mdash; Gets the title of the current HTML document.
-  * `setTitle( newTitle : string )` &mdash; Sets the title of the current HTML document. 
+  * `getTitle() : string`&mdash;Gets the title of the current HTML document.
+  * `setTitle( newTitle : string )`&mdash;Sets the title of the current HTML document. 
 
-  Let's inject the `Title` service into the root `AppComponent` and expose a bindable `setTitle` method that calls it:
+  You can inject the `Title` service into the root `AppComponent` and expose a bindable `setTitle` method that calls it:
 
 +makeExample( "cb-set-document-title/ts/src/app/app.component.ts", "class", "src/app/app.component.ts (class)" )(format='.')
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-  We bind that method to three anchor tags and, voilà!
+  Bind that method to three anchor tags and voilà!
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    img(src="/resources/images/cookbooks/set-document-title/set-title-anim.gif" alt="Set title")
 
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-  Here's the complete solution
+  Here's the complete solution:
 
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   `cb-set-document-title/ts/src/main.ts,
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-  ## Why we provide the *Title* service in *bootstrap*
+  ## Why provide the *Title* service in *bootstrap*
 
-  We generally recommended providing application-wide services in the root application component, `AppComponent`.
+  Generally you want to provide application-wide services in the root application component, `AppComponent`.
 
-  Here we recommend registering the title service during bootstrapping,
-  a location we reserve for configuring the runtime Angular environment.
+  This cookbook recommends registering the title service during bootstrapping,
+  a location you reserve for configuring the runtime Angular environment.
 
-  That's exactly what we're doing.
+  That's exactly what you're doing.
   The `Title` service is part of the Angular *browser platform*.
-  If we bootstrap our application into a different platform,
-  we'll have to provide a different `Title` service that understands the concept of a "document title" for that specific platform.
-  Ideally the application itself neither knows nor cares about the runtime environment.
+  If you bootstrap your application into a different platform,
+  you'll have to provide a different `Title` service that understands 
+  the concept of a "document title" for that specific platform.
+  Ideally, the application itself neither knows nor cares about the runtime environment.
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