I’ve really liked it so far, and I’ll patiently wait for updates. I do have some thoughts about a particularly weird way I tend to play IFs (at least on my first playthrough), but you already seem to have half a solution for it built into the story.
In my first playthrough of any IF, I usually pick stoic, logical, pragmatic, and emotionally detached choices. I like getting to know the characters while keeping my own character emotionally inaccessible, so I can make better choices later depending on which RO route I want to follow in future playthroughs.
My usual issue is that almost no one expects readers to choose the “solo” route, so most of the time (though I have found exceptions) we eventually get forced into scenes with one of the ROs being kind and supportive because the MC is going through a rough time. That can feel a little strange when my character never really became friends with any of the ROs in the first place.
That’s where your story already has the issue half-fixed: the MC deeply cares about their sibling, and that relationship could naturally fill that emotional role if we aren’t pursuing any RO routes.
Then again, I do tend to play in weird ways during my first run xD. But I also genuinely enjoy seeing how the story handles a character who rejects everyone. I mean, if the option is there, I’m going to pick it just to see what happens, right?
Other than that, I really love the story as a whole, and the premise is very interesting. Defeated rebellion survivors being forced to serve the king because he was merciful enough not to execute them all is such a compelling setup. Although some of the characters’ reactions toward us feel a bit soft at times, I can understand that it’s probably more along the lines of, “I trust my king and his decisions,” rather than, “How could you let those traitors live?”
I sound like I’m ranting, don’t I? Sorry, that’s really not my intention at all. It was a very enjoyable read, and if your goal was to keep a lighter tone and a feeling of “if you keep moving forward, you’ll get there eventually,” then you absolutely nailed it. That’s definitely the vibe I got while reading.
I love how gentle this story is, even though the characters have gone through bad things. Soft LI's who help the mc through their trauma is a guilty pleasure of mine :) I do hope this project hasn't been dropped, but I also hope that you, author, are doing well!
I was very interested in the setting and our story, but tbh once I got into I did not like it. Mainly cause everyone is too damn nice! My whole family and I rebelled against the king. We killed, I assume, many of them. Like ok maybe the King is a nice guy, whatever, but every damn knight and servant and whoever I meet?? Like, come on, bruh, give me someone who doesn't like me.
Hi, I understand your criticism. The reason why the story was written that way, aside from in-game motifs, is that I wanted to write something purposefully on the comforting, softer side. This game is very personal, and so I understand that the choices I made will not be liked by every reader. Thank you anyway for trying it out!
This is such a lovely game. I've been following it's progress here and there and I do hope that it continues because it's very beautifully written. I wish the creator the best of luck writing.
Hi! The game is still being worked on and will not be abandoned anytime soon, the updates are just bound to be very irregular due to my schedule irl and some chronic health issues.
for 99.4% of the time, I hd only one choice. If I wanted to read a book, with no choices, I could read a book. I wanted to make choices and shape my own story but I couldn't. so I give up.
This game has managed to captivate me for sure, and I'm really eager to see how things unfold! Definitely want to romance Arthur of course, but also really curious about what poly routes are gonna be available! (Hoping for Arthur and Yniol honestly XD)
The author has mentioned on their Tumblr that the currently listed poly pairings are not final and are subject to change, though I don't know if that's what OP is referring to
Dude this game is soo good, well made and engaging makes me so excited for chapter 3 and what happens next with the different romances and stories. Hope chapter 3 comes soon! (BTW your writing style is chefs kiss)
Absolutely lovely first two chapters of this game! It's definitely interesting to see what can change from playthrough to playthrough. I'm looking forward to the development! Beautifully done!
Hi, the project is still active, it will be until I make an announcement of discontinuing it (if the day ever comes), however know that updates aren't regular due to it being an hobby project
The pure thought put into each character, I live. The pure gender of Arthur, and dear baby Mordred, and the impressive competence of so many different characters and Ghaven and Cat hair (Ghaven is winning at life)... I live. Absolutely will continue to follow and buy when it's complete.
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too good
I keep coming back to this game uuuuugh I love it, I especially enjoy the siblings reactions to the MC getting married to the King
<3
Hi, how have you been ? 🤗
urghh so good! came back to read for a second time hoping there was more, pls continue!
Really like it so far! Can't wait to see where the story goes
PEAK???
I beg of you, more please.
hoping this is still being worked on!
I absolutely adore this though i wonder if it will be finished
i cannot wait for the next chapters, i am already getting ready to romance both Arthur and Evaine lol
Me too! ;
I’ve really liked it so far, and I’ll patiently wait for updates. I do have some thoughts about a particularly weird way I tend to play IFs (at least on my first playthrough), but you already seem to have half a solution for it built into the story.
In my first playthrough of any IF, I usually pick stoic, logical, pragmatic, and emotionally detached choices. I like getting to know the characters while keeping my own character emotionally inaccessible, so I can make better choices later depending on which RO route I want to follow in future playthroughs.
My usual issue is that almost no one expects readers to choose the “solo” route, so most of the time (though I have found exceptions) we eventually get forced into scenes with one of the ROs being kind and supportive because the MC is going through a rough time. That can feel a little strange when my character never really became friends with any of the ROs in the first place.
That’s where your story already has the issue half-fixed: the MC deeply cares about their sibling, and that relationship could naturally fill that emotional role if we aren’t pursuing any RO routes.
Then again, I do tend to play in weird ways during my first run xD. But I also genuinely enjoy seeing how the story handles a character who rejects everyone. I mean, if the option is there, I’m going to pick it just to see what happens, right?
Other than that, I really love the story as a whole, and the premise is very interesting. Defeated rebellion survivors being forced to serve the king because he was merciful enough not to execute them all is such a compelling setup. Although some of the characters’ reactions toward us feel a bit soft at times, I can understand that it’s probably more along the lines of, “I trust my king and his decisions,” rather than, “How could you let those traitors live?”
I sound like I’m ranting, don’t I? Sorry, that’s really not my intention at all. It was a very enjoyable read, and if your goal was to keep a lighter tone and a feeling of “if you keep moving forward, you’ll get there eventually,” then you absolutely nailed it. That’s definitely the vibe I got while reading.
I love how gentle this story is, even though the characters have gone through bad things. Soft LI's who help the mc through their trauma is a guilty pleasure of mine :) I do hope this project hasn't been dropped, but I also hope that you, author, are doing well!
I was very interested in the setting and our story, but tbh once I got into I did not like it. Mainly cause everyone is too damn nice! My whole family and I rebelled against the king. We killed, I assume, many of them. Like ok maybe the King is a nice guy, whatever, but every damn knight and servant and whoever I meet?? Like, come on, bruh, give me someone who doesn't like me.
Hi, I understand your criticism. The reason why the story was written that way, aside from in-game motifs, is that I wanted to write something purposefully on the comforting, softer side. This game is very personal, and so I understand that the choices I made will not be liked by every reader. Thank you anyway for trying it out!
That's fair enough. Good luck on future development o7
this was absolutely wonderful and I hope there is more eventually! The writing was delicious and the characters were so interesting and wonderful <3
THERE'S ONLY TWO CHAPTERS?!?!
NOOOOOOOOOOO
I NEED MOOOOREEEE
This is such a lovely game. I've been following it's progress here and there and I do hope that it continues because it's very beautifully written. I wish the creator the best of luck writing.
i just love the tenderness that is in the way you write your characters' relationships. i feel like this games is my safe space
I am eating this story up like carbonara, gang. I am seriously enjoying it🙏
I loved this story so much. Is there a full completed version?
Being that the last update was in January, does anyone know if this is still being worked on? Even the tumblr doesn't seem to have recent posts
Hi! The game is still being worked on and will not be abandoned anytime soon, the updates are just bound to be very irregular due to my schedule irl and some chronic health issues.
Awesome, thanks for the reply Kal, I appreciate it.
for 99.4% of the time, I hd only one choice. If I wanted to read a book, with no choices, I could read a book. I wanted to make choices and shape my own story but I couldn't. so I give up.
Gwyar <3
10/10 game can't wait for more
God, this is so good! I want it so much!
can't wait for the completion!
loved this one so much
Very interesting game!! I will wait for it to be finished!
This game has managed to captivate me for sure, and I'm really eager to see how things unfold! Definitely want to romance Arthur of course, but also really curious about what poly routes are gonna be available! (Hoping for Arthur and Yniol honestly XD)
The poly routes are: Arthur/Gwyar, Arthur/Evaine, Morien/Gwyar, Morien/Yniol.
The author has mentioned on their Tumblr that the currently listed poly pairings are not final and are subject to change, though I don't know if that's what OP is referring to
Dude this game is soo good, well made and engaging makes me so excited for chapter 3 and what happens next with the different romances and stories. Hope chapter 3 comes soon! (BTW your writing style is chefs kiss)
Amazing. When I first saw Mordred, I was like
Absolutely lovely first two chapters of this game! It's definitely interesting to see what can change from playthrough to playthrough. I'm looking forward to the development! Beautifully done!
i cant WAIT to romance morien
I am actually an addict. This was so well-written that I couldn't keep my eyes off of it. Loved the work!
i will still wait for u my beloved yniol
Loved whats there and the concept. I hope there's more to come
Enjoying this a lot so far. Hope to see more!
Does anyone know if the project is still active? :)
Hi, the project is still active, it will be until I make an announcement of discontinuing it (if the day ever comes), however know that updates aren't regular due to it being an hobby project
Amazinggg
Oh this is deeply engaging and very well written.
The pure thought put into each character, I live. The pure gender of Arthur, and dear baby Mordred, and the impressive competence of so many different characters and Ghaven and Cat hair (Ghaven is winning at life)... I live. Absolutely will continue to follow and buy when it's complete.
My friend brought me in and I blazed through both chapters in a day. I'm gonna have to do so many runs bc I already adore every route possibility.
I want CHAPTER THREE BADLY !! hahaha much encouragement from Spain !!