Waterfall
a traditional haiku
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white torrent tumbling
down from the rocky heavens
churning blue water
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white torrent tumbling
down from the rocky heavens
churning blue water
Occasionally writing cumbersome prose. Frequently writing stumbling verse. I’ve spent a lot of time reading, and now I’m giving writing a go.
I like this a lot. You've caught the spirit of haiku presenting the image and then allowing the reader to adduce any hidden level of metaphor or layer of meaning. Can I suggest one small tweak.white torrent tumblesdown from the rocky heavenschurning…
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