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Back At It

3 min readApr 24, 2025

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Revamping AARON (35) LANDSCAPER.

Let’s try this again.

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Oops. Looks like I deleted that whole opening scene.

GOOD RIDDANCE

We don’t need it.

I’m going to start with a real rough go of it.

A member of Aaron’s landscaping crew asks him for Brooke’s number — he didn’t realize they were dating. This makes Aaron think, then he goes out to buy a ring for her. Not out of love or wanting to get married, just to keep what he has.

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Fresh new start. This is first draft, so we’ll clean up and clarify all this later on. Right now, I just want to get to the part where he buys the ring. If we’re lucky, we’ll get all the way to him proposing to Brooke.

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