We’re Writing Again

AARON (35) LANDSCAPER is looking to push the story forward.

We left off just before the engagement scene. Aaron has a ring and a fun fact. Initially, I was thinking we’d jump right in and go straight for the proposal, but he bought that ring on his lunch break…

Let’s work it out.

I know you can’t see me right now, but I am GIGGLING. Not because of the content, that’s obviously horrifying, but because we went through and chopped up that first act, but still get use some of it in the new draft. That’s a good feeling.

AND finding the skull BEFORE he proposes, let’s us have a more frantic scene. Aaron’s getting thrown around.

It’s around this time I start to get a little bit nervous about whether or not we set up the world and characters enough before jumping into the story. In this case, I really don’t think we need to add too much more up top.

We’ve got the trivia post-it notes, Brooke makes his lunch, they do trivia nights, Aaron owns his landscaping…