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Sentience

Does explanation explain away experience?

1 min readAug 5, 2026
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The worm is hungry, at the other end an inviting odor,
The terrain in-between noxious, a single neuron inhibits crossing order.
That I can explain on the basis of a neuron, the behavioral response,
Makes me treat it as non-sentient, to be crushed as a sponge.

The fly is courting and mating, there’s a dopamine rush,
The dopamine inhibits the circuit, that makes it fly when I crush.
That levels of a neurotransmitter, can explain its readiness to act,
Makes me treat the fly as expendable, put them in the non-conscious sect.

The worm and the fly, are pulled between pleasure and pain,
Between a catastrophic loss, and possibilities of gain.
If chemicals and cells, can explain all their feat,
Are they conscious, have agency, can choose or feel?

I think they are sentient, we can give them the benefit of doubt,
They suffer and pine like we do, though they may not cry out loud.

PS: This poem was inspired by reading this article today by long-time blogger-days friend Bjoern Brembs and was first published at my poetry blog here.

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Sandeep Gautam
Sandeep Gautam

Written by Sandeep Gautam⁠

#Psychology, #Programming, #Poetry. Passionate about well-being and suicide prevention; IITD (CS); Ex-Cisco, ex-HSS; ex-Reliance; Write sonnets almost daily!