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Looking for Love

3 min readJun 14, 2024

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“So, let me get this straight. You’ve been in a relationship for weeks online?”

Lisa felt uncomfortable. Susanne always asked direct questions, like darts.

“I don’t need to be next to him to know that he’s a good person,” Lisa countered.

Susanne worried for her friend. She wondered if need had a scent and men were sensitive to it, either running a mile with one whiff or, if predatory, sensing the potential for emotional exploitation. For Lisa was one of those women who had to have a man and didn’t feel like she was anything unless there was one in her life. Susanne found this really sad.

“Tell me about him,” Susanne said and watched as Lisa’s eyes lit up.

“He’s a vet. He’s always sending pictures of animals he’s saved.” Lisa’s eyes widened excitedly as she talked. “He’s based in Manchester and he lives in a flat in the centre. He loves walking, going to concerts and travel. He’s funny too!”

“He sounds nice,” Susanne said, and added, “So where do you see it going?”

Lisa looked at her friend and burst into tears. Susanne was completely surprised by the reaction and reached for her friend.

“Hey! Hey! What’s this?”

“I’m never going to find anyone!” Lisa sobbed.

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Rachel Deeming
Rachel Deeming

Written by Rachel Deeming

Storyteller. Poet. Reviewer. Opinion piece writer. I love to write. I am writing A Story Every Day in 2024, microfictions daily of no more than 366 words