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Just like the ocean,
Mysterious, phenomenal, eternal
She has her depths as well
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Just like the ocean,
They stayed unexplored
Waiting for the right one to decode!
-AT
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May 25, 2022
Hi Bruce Noll,Thank you for your interest in my work. Though the peom is titled "Depth", a plural form of the same has been used in the first para of the poem. Refering to the plural version, i.e., "Depths", the second para has the pronoun "they".Happy to elaborate my perspective of this poem if needed :)
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Hello Archana_T,I enjoyed this. I do have a question though. You titled thsi "Depth" and in the poem you refer to her Depths and you use the pronoun "they."Help me understand this further please?Thank you and this poem did capture my attention!
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I loved your poem. I've a couple of thoughts, more of a personal choice. Ocean is deep, and the title also makes clear the comparison is with depth, then perhaps, you can remove - "has her depths." Also, on the same minimalistic vain if you remove "They stayed." Thoughts?
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