Sai Ramachandran·Jul 10, 2018FilioSoft“Conference Apps SaaS platform” is too geeky for the average conference organizer. KISS! So I changed it to “Get an App for your Next…
Sai Ramachandran·Jul 10, 2018VoicietyThe original headline took too long to get to the point. So I merged the headline and the subheading as follows-
Sai Ramachandran·Jul 10, 2018FullServiceI like to focus the headline on the client’s needs. With freelancers, the usual questions relate to quality and unreliable results. So, the…
Sai Ramachandran·Jul 9, 2018SwapcardThe real attraction of a product like Swapcard is that it makes attendees addicted to the event in question. They want to come back to it…
Sai Ramachandran·Jul 9, 2018Rezio.meI found “The best way…” very abstract. Best as compared to what? So I changed that to “Easily manage your online business”
Sai Ramachandran·Jul 9, 2018CollectTrustI felt “Be a Trusted Business” was too abstract. I’d go with a more concrete “Win More Business” headline.
Sai Ramachandran·Jul 9, 2018LearniOSCoding.comI didn’t like that “Part Time” was at the same level as “Learn building iOS Apps”. Part time is generally a secondary feature while…
Sai Ramachandran·May 18, 2018UseRibbonExcuse my bluntness but there is something vaguely “crazy” about the original copy. When I visit a website, I don’t expect to do something…
Sai Ramachandran·May 18, 2018BroadcastLaunchI didn’t at all understand what “The Only Radio Station Communication Platform” could mean. It felt incomplete. “The Only platform” …to do…
Sai Ramachandran·May 18, 2018ThemeLatteThe copy is pretty good already though I would consider using “..your business..” and “..your website..” instead of the definitive.
