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COMEDY OF MANNERS | SERIAL FICTION

A Most Improper Woman

ACT—I: The Education of Miss Vale—scene 1: Two Parlors

9 min readNov 1, 2026

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A young woman in a blue silk gown with lace cuffs and pearl earrings sits in a candlelit, richly furnished seventeenth-century parlour. Resting her chin on one hand, she gives a knowing sideways glance with a subtle, amused smile. Oranges and silverware sit on the table beside her. The title “A Most Improper Woman” appears in elegant ivory lettering to her left.
Cover artwork of Eleanor Vale generated with OpenAI.

Setting

London. Lincoln’s Inn Fields. Saturday, the twenty-eighth of September, 1678. The eve of Michaelmas. Morning.

The ground floor of the Vale house: two parlors side by side, joined by a connecting door that will not quite close.

The FRONT PARLOR is dressed for wealth. A Turkey carpet. A tall looking-glass. Silver candlesticks blazing at ten in the morning. A bowl of oranges nobody is permitted to eat.

The BACK PARLOR is dressed for the truth. A cold grate. Two hard chairs. A pale square on the wall where a painting once hung.

Characters in this scene

  • ELEANOR VALE, the daughter of the house
  • LADY VALE, her mother
  • HANNAH, the Vales’ maid, and the last of their servants
  • THE FOOTMAN, hired for the day
  • MR. CUTBILL, a mercer of Paternoster Row, owed money
  • SIR ANTHONY CURBWELL, a baronet, owed obedience

Sir Gervase Vale, the master of the house, is upstairs and will not be coming down.

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Prabhakar Singh
Prabhakar Singh

Written by Prabhakar Singh⁠

Verse when it's quiet. Serials when it won't stop. Drama when it wants an audience. And notes from the desk whenever the books talk back.

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