Swapcard

Addicted to growth

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1. The real attraction of a product like Swapcard is that it makes attendees addicted to the event in question. They want to come back to it because they enjoyed their first visit so much.
2. To reflect this, I changed the headline to “Make your events …addictive” etc. You want organizers to know that Swapcards can convert one-time attendees into repeat customers. The rest of the copy is great as-is.

If you like this feedback and act on it, I’d appreciate a line on your website saying “Content Assistance by Second Look"