!The Young Adult Book Club! discussion

Hello people, I need some more help with my book. It takes place in world where demons and humans, usually in a segregated communities. The main character was raised by a family of demon hunters. On his 18th birthday, that family is taken by a powerful demon that seeks a challenge and forces the main out into the unknown world. On the very same day, the Main finds out that he is half demon. Along with his search for his family, he must learn to accept what is and how it affect what he become. His has a personality and never takes things anything too seriously, except when it comes to his loyalty to his friends and family. The question is should I add some romance to you. If so, I welcome any and all tips.

Most teens like SOME romance. It's not very believable that an 18-year old boy isn't going to have some kind sexual feelings. I mean, that's the age when they're the strongest.

I thing I'm going with a mild romance that will develop slowly over a long period of time. I hope it works. If it don't, I can take it out and not hear't the story. here is an excerpt from the book I posted. http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/1...