David R Poetry
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Top writer in Poetry. I am a diarist and write poetry to reflect my thoughts.
Very clever and playful, David. You've turned a simple theme into something cheerful and full of imagination.
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It’s useful to have A light
So you can see in the night
Alight from a train
Or start a new flame
And make a dull day bright
God said let there B light
Giving man his first sight
Dividin...
This is a clever and playful piece of light verse built on a strong central concept. The progression through “A light,” “B light,” “C the light,” and “D light” provides a satisfying and well-defined structure.
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Brilliantly crafted! Turning simple letters into such a rhythmic and meaningful poem takes real skill. Thanks for brightening my feed today! ❤️
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